Tim's Feedback

We performed our piece to Tim, so see what we could improve on for our actual assessment. He really liked the majority of our piece and thought that the music juxtaposed well with the gas and was really appropriate for our movements.

He gave us some constructive advice, just to make sure that we were always moving and using our prop, the scarf, when possible. This would allow our piece and our movements to flow more, whilst also creating more meaning out of simple movements. This will also leave no sections of our piece looking like we haven't spent as much time on them, or that they look a little under-rehearsed next to some of the sequences we have.

This was really helpful advice and it has definitely benefited our piece. We will work on making sure that our piece is as effective and relevant to our stimulus as possible, whilst using our prop effectively to it's full potential.